He is mentioned only briefly, and there is no explanation as to the remark in the last paragraph, stating that he may not be alive. While the writer generally expresses the interpretation very well, grammar mistakes notwithstanding, there should be more discussion of the grandson. What aspects of the story are left unexplained? In plain terms, this is a new theme, and presenting it in the last sentence of the essay is strange and illogical. The author does not restate the thesis, which is strong and accurate, and instead introduces the idea of God as vital to helping all carry on. My only disagreement with the authorвЂ™s analysis goes to the final line. Where do you disagree with the authorвЂ™s analysis? In terms of improvement, then, only tenses and grammar need attention, because the writer moves from past and present tense, and also quotes incorrectly through not using apostrophes well. The use of quotes is solid and effective, and the author sets them in place as supporting the ideas of the essay. Then, the writer does create paragraphs exploring different aspects to the realities.Дoes the author support each main point with direct quotations from the story that are analyzed and explained? Do you have any suggestions for improvement? In fairness to the writer, the story itself is such that these realities define.

On another, however, there is a repetition in how that character and age of Phoenix is discussed. On one level, the writer keeps to topic sentences as followed through to an extent. Is each paragraph organized around one key point? Do topic sentences clearly indicate the focus of each paragraph? It emphasizes the heroic quality of Phoenix and the story arc of her tenacity and strength, as it also incorporates the subtle and critical element of her love for her grandson. The paper presents the thesis at the close of the opening paragraph, and it clearly expresses the authorвЂ™s interpretation of the story. Is it obvious or unclear? Does it establish an interpretation of a key theme from the story? Is the thesis as specific as it needs to be?

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